Strongest point of paper

One of my strongest points of my paper is when I bring up segregation. It is starting off pretty well, but it could also use some editing. So I guess it is also my weakest.

Worst mistakes

When I write I tend to write as if I were speaking to someone. But that's not my problem, the problem with this is that I accidentally do a lot of run on sentences. I try to add a lot of commas though to stop it. I also have  a huge problem with organizing my topics to make sense.

Evidence

It is important to have evidence to back up your theory. Evidence are facts that are very helpful in a paper, especially a research paper. When you have evidence it also makes it seem like you know what your talking about.

Research Paragraph

Well I interviewed y grandma over the phone, and she told me that I am parts Swedish, Canadian,  Norwegian, and English. I also learned that she was in high school when JFK got assassinated. And that she was born in 1946, which I believe is when WW2 ended.

Topic

For my topic I am choosing some of the different ethnic backgrounds that have migrated from America. I will do countries like Sweden. Canada, and England.

Go to reaserch.

When I have a assignment for a research the first thing I do is go to Google. Google is a research engine that helps me find the topic that I need to write about. Google is amazing, and if it was non existent then it would be very hard to write a research paper.